So - having provided short stories for a horror comic zine myself, while that is not comparable to making a game, one thing I do know about delivering a short experience at limited time is that when you can't get super elaborate for a story, you have to deliver at least one cool and unique visual.
This DEFINITELY delivers that when we get to the spooky highlight!
It's almos ta little unfortunate that the game continues after that and is fairly calm, especially since it's not entirely clear what the context is for it, but the buildup to the main scare and the scare itself works really well and is certainly unique. I enjoyed it greatly.
I honestly feel that the game is lacking in content and doesn't really clarify what the story is. Hopefully, the creator works on it more and adds more of a story.
Please tell me you plan on finishing this? I really enjoyed what you gave. For something incomplete, it was really good. I hope to see a finished product from you soon! ^_^
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So - having provided short stories for a horror comic zine myself, while that is not comparable to making a game, one thing I do know about delivering a short experience at limited time is that when you can't get super elaborate for a story, you have to deliver at least one cool and unique visual.
This DEFINITELY delivers that when we get to the spooky highlight!
It's almos ta little unfortunate that the game continues after that and is fairly calm, especially since it's not entirely clear what the context is for it, but the buildup to the main scare and the scare itself works really well and is certainly unique. I enjoyed it greatly.
It was short and has really nice pixel graphics, which I love the most about these games. I can tell you put a lot of work into this! Great work!
nice
This was a really cool game and I enjoyed playing!
Hi HBY, loved this game and Catherine. Is there any way to contact you for collaborations?
Really good game! It has nice atmosfere. I made a video hope you like it :)
Loved it even if I almost completely lost it.
Ooh, neat.
This was so good! I love the style and the music and honestly I want more! Can't wait to see what's next! Starts at 8:02!
a simple game but still very good
great job!!!
Good game. I like it! Great job!
Loved it! added to my semi-fear of trains, though.
Got me hooked!
Love it!
short, sweet, delicious, pixely goodness.
I honestly feel that the game is lacking in content and doesn't really clarify what the story is. Hopefully, the creator works on it more and adds more of a story.
This game was really good! I hope to see more from you in the future!
i love it just give some indication of an end because it loops and i played it twice thinking there was more
Excellent work, great atmosphere. Looking forward to a finished version.
is it supposed to loop like that?
Please tell me you plan on finishing this? I really enjoyed what you gave. For something incomplete, it was really good. I hope to see a finished product from you soon! ^_^
Mysterious
It's great! I hope the full version will come soon. But take your time tho! Props. The feel is really great!
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good
Fine work. Would love to experience a full-fledged story!
really cool vibes
Nice art and the mood is very dark - I like it!
love the art, and the lil smoking guy.
Interesting game! And written in C!
Do you think you'll make the game longer? Or will only add a ending?
Anyway, I liked it the game.
I don't get the ending
Haha sorry I didn't manage to make the ending I wanted in time for submission. I might add it later this week though!